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What Happened?

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PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


0 posted 10-20-1999 06:01 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild




Whatever I have done to offend you,
Know that I am truly sorry.
You said that I hurt you without telling me why.
Now I just sit and worry.

I think back on old conversations
Can't think of what I have done.
If I hurt you, believe it was done without intent.
My friend, my very best one.

You left me in a parking lot
At that old truck stop on I-184
You looked angry and wouldn't even talk to me.
Chilling my heart to the core.

You said I had hurt you,
But you wouldn't tell me why.
Your blue eyes were blazing like diamond fire
And then you made me cry.

You left me there alone
To contemplate some crime.
I wish I could see things from your view
Now I'm just doin' time.

I must surely be guilty
Else you'd be over your mad.
I have mulled it over and over again in my mind
Can't think of anything bad.

So I guess it's on you
Cuz you've made me sad.
You've been my friend since nineteen-oh-two
Now it's up to you to get glad.

By: WildChild 10/20/99

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-21-1999 08:58 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


2 posted 10-21-1999 05:18 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Thank you Watcher. It feels good to know that someone is reading as well as writing.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Denise
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3 posted 10-21-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I enjoyed this WildChild. Sounds like my first boyfriend! So glad he's history!

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Denise
 
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