though I may not be much older than you, this has plastered all over it "Teen Angst". though it is a nice piece and all your teen friends will say it's good and they like it, few other than them will see it. though they can relate to it, they can't get inside of it, which are two different things. yes, I can relate to it and I can understand what you mean, yet it is so foriegn as to mean nothing. a writer writes to his/her audience, as much as to themselves. yet if a writer tries to hold just one age group, you will find that what may be good one year is not the next. what may be easy to write one day, is impossible the next. I'm not saying it's not a good piece, what I am saying is that it is a selfabsorbed piece. you are showing everyone that you have this jewel, yet when they ask to touch it, you keep them at arms length. you have to describe the sensation of what it feels like to them. how does this love feel? does it make you dance as if the wind were your partner? expound and share. and thank you for posting this. one of my friends told me that along time ago and it just now made sense.