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It sounds pretty good to me

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Seymour Tabin
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George Carlin, perspectives on life.

It sounds pretty good to me.

The most unfair thing about life is the way it ends.
You should die first and get it the hell out of the way.
Then live in an old age home for just the proper stay.
Get kicked out when your too young and you get a gold watch
Work forty years till young enough for retirement
Do drugs, alcohol, party till your enlightenment
After that you become a kid again in grade school
From there a baby with all the childish emoting.
Go back in the womb and spend the last nine months floating.
And all that's left, to finish off as an orgasm.
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Sounds good to me too Sy.....
Thanks for sharing this....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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.aedi eht ekil I
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Sy, I'm gonna take your advice and work on getting back into the womb as soon as I can. Thanks!
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4 posted 10-20-1999 04:32 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this....get younger instead of older.

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Pepper,
Glad it sounds goo to you.
U K Hero,
sknahT.
Balladeer,
Lots of luck and thank you for the read.
Watcher,
Glad you liked the idea I thought it was funny.
Seymour Tabin
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Pepper,
Glad it sounds goo to you.
U K Hero,
sknahT.
Balladeer,
Lots of luck and thank you for the read.
Watcher,
Glad you liked the idea I thought it was funny.
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LOL - one prob - what a short end!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 10-21-1999 09:23 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
A short end but a sensational one. LOL
hoot_owl_rn
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Hey, I could handle that one
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-21-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Thanks for the read, comment and smile.
Martie
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I guess what it boils down to is, when you come, you go.
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Yep, lots of pretty good ideas in this one!

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Martie and Denise,
Thank you both for accepting the humor and commenting.
 
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