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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-10-20 01:12 PM


George Carlin, perspectives on life.

It sounds pretty good to me.

The most unfair thing about life is the way it ends.
You should die first and get it the hell out of the way.
Then live in an old age home for just the proper stay.
Get kicked out when your too young and you get a gold watch
Work forty years till young enough for retirement
Do drugs, alcohol, party till your enlightenment
After that you become a kid again in grade school
From there a baby with all the childish emoting.
Go back in the womb and spend the last nine months floating.
And all that's left, to finish off as an orgasm.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 1999-10-20 01:24 PM


Sounds good to me too Sy.....
Thanks for sharing this....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

U K Hero
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2 posted 1999-10-20 03:37 PM


.aedi eht ekil I
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-10-20 03:40 PM


Sy, I'm gonna take your advice and work on getting back into the womb as soon as I can. Thanks!
Watcher666
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4 posted 1999-10-20 04:32 PM


Liked this....get younger instead of older.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 1999-10-20 05:37 PM


Pepper,
Glad it sounds goo to you.
U K Hero,
sknahT.
Balladeer,
Lots of luck and thank you for the read.
Watcher,
Glad you liked the idea I thought it was funny.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-10-20 05:37 PM


Pepper,
Glad it sounds goo to you.
U K Hero,
sknahT.
Balladeer,
Lots of luck and thank you for the read.
Watcher,
Glad you liked the idea I thought it was funny.

Severn
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7 posted 1999-10-21 12:09 PM


LOL - one prob - what a short end!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-10-21 09:23 AM


Severn,
A short end but a sensational one. LOL

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-10-21 10:23 AM


Hey, I could handle that one
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 1999-10-21 05:55 PM


Hoot,
Thanks for the read, comment and smile.

Martie
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11 posted 1999-10-21 06:46 PM


I guess what it boils down to is, when you come, you go.
Denise
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12 posted 1999-10-21 08:28 PM


Yep, lots of pretty good ideas in this one!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 1999-10-21 10:32 PM


Martie and Denise,
Thank you both for accepting the humor and commenting.

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