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Watcher666
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0 posted 10-20-1999 10:48 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

White wings, Soft as Gossamer thread
Pure Silver halo about her head
Sun shines though her smile
Lets all pain ebb for awhile

In darkest times she comforts me
Her wings enfolding, no one can see
The hurt and bitterness locked in my heart
All the pain and loneliness there from the start

Her voice as clear as crystal bells
A poignant story of life it tells
Of destruction and loss from which I can't hide
This lonely life I am forced to ride

Her breath so sweet gives me new life
Helps me deal with the pain and strife
Eyes more focused, vision clear
The end of the path now totally clear

I see a rainbow on a cloudy day
Please dear angel with me stay
For there can be like you no another
Thatís why in life I called you Mother



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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
© Copyright 1999 Watcher666 - All Rights Reserved
Ayla
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1 posted 10-20-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Beautiful poem..very sweet.. : )

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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-20-1999 11:50 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How beautiful and what a wonderful dedication to your mother
DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-20-1999 01:02 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis a wonderful piece and tribute.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

wannabe_poet
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4 posted 10-21-1999 12:28 AM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

I agree it is a very beautiful poem.

Dark Angel
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5 posted 10-21-1999 01:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Watcher, this is beautiful, a beautiful tribute to your mother

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


6 posted 10-21-1999 04:26 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Very touching.....and guilt inducing. I have been so unnapreciative of my mother and father....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Watcher666
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7 posted 10-21-1999 10:05 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thank-You all for reading.Still trying to get over the greif of her loss.Writing helps.Sorry to torture all of you.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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8 posted 10-21-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

So very beautiful Watcher!
Am so sorry for your loss.
This poem really touched me.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Munda
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9 posted 10-21-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Watcher......so beautiful !
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 10-21-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Watch...I cried reading your dedication to your mother. She has raised a good person by the love you display, a part of her shines in you! Lovely poem!

My prayers are with you and may your heart be comforted!
WhtDove
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11 posted 10-21-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Watcher this was beautiful! How sweet. I hope say day my kids will see this in me. Not that I'm an angel but the love we hold for our kids. LOVED IT!!!
Martie
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12 posted 10-21-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This was so touching. Sometimes I miss my mother so much and wish I could tell her as well as you have here, how much she meant to me.
Julie
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13 posted 10-21-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Watcher,
I am a collector of angels in words and images. This is the best I have ever seen and what a beautiful dedication to your mother. Beautifully done!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


Denise
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14 posted 10-21-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A beautiful tribute, indeed!

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Denise
H. Arlequin
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There is no quicker way to understanding a person than to listen to him/her talk about loving parents, if they were fortunate enough to have them. And those of us who did have wonderful parents, like your mother, when we share memories we hold dear, it touches their hearts with what is special about living immersed in a treasured memory to be.

wd watcher and ty for sharing so well!


excelsior,

HA
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


16 posted 10-22-1999 03:42 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Well done oh lurker of the shadows!
I really liked how you used allusion here to mislead, then bring it together at the end!
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17 posted 10-22-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

What a beautiful tribute... well done!
Trynete
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18 posted 10-22-1999 12:16 PM       View Profile for Trynete   Email Trynete   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Trynete's Home Page   View IP for Trynete

Ohhhh :*) how sweet, I think you should print the poem out, and place it on her grave, she would have liked this poem. I'm sorry for your loss.
EXCELLENT job.
DarkKnight
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19 posted 10-23-1999 06:39 PM       View Profile for DarkKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkKnight

Moving in a tender way,
words so softly sweetly said;
A misty eyed tribute to an angel of yours,
A thanks for the hand that once led.
A word of comfort from a world apart -
One cannot lose what is kept in the heart.

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She walks in silence and waits in shadow. She is my lady and my angel.
Nan
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20 posted 10-24-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, indeed, Watch.... Parents certainly deserve more reverence from us... Nice job..
jennysbeau1
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21 posted 10-24-1999 10:07 AM       View Profile for jennysbeau1   Email jennysbeau1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jennysbeau1

Beautiful...what a tribute motherhood...I really engoyed it....exellent!!
Deverone
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22 posted 10-25-1999 01:54 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

Watcher this was very beautiful.

To quote a movie "The Crow".....
"Mother is the name for god on the lips and hearts of all children."

All I can say is WOW.....WOW.....WOW


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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---


daphna
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23 posted 10-25-1999 04:07 AM       View Profile for daphna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for daphna

Oh Watcher, this is perfect. I lost my mother to cancer in May and have been in too much pain to write about it. I will read this again and again. No torture for me in your words!
DreadedOne
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This is very good...I like it alot watcher


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