Axiomatic Precept *Double Entendre*(Repost)

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Axiomatic Precept *Double Entendre*(Repost)

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-10-20 03:21 AM

Burdened by a rail of hopes,
and countless dreams of morality-
mankind lies buried,
beneath a divagation of timeless mis-conceptions.
What can and cannot be.
We are hindered,
impededed by the fear-
of our own imaginations.

Prone to push our limits,
yet doomed never to succeed.

And yet we can

-BELIEVE-

that across the threshold of the unknown,
lies true understanding
-of the past that is our future-
-and the tomorrow that is our destiny-

For splashed across the realms,
of endless possibilities,
-lay the precepts of immortality.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 1999-10-20 07:07 AM

Wow!...Great read says a smiling Rainbow.

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-20 09:59 AM

FANTASTIC!! Loved it!Well done Wolf!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-20 04:37 PM

Hey Chris, I'm really not sure what a "Double Entendre", but I am sure of one thing......regardless, this is a good piece of poetry!

Michael

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California

4 posted 1999-10-20 04:48 PM

Yeah, Chris,
I'm with Hoot on this one...What the heck is a "Double Entendre", you just made that up to confuse me, huh? Very powerful piece,

Prone to push our limits,
yet doomed never to succeed.

Those two lines are a poem by themselves.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-10-20 11:57 PM

WOW - I missed this before dear. Awesome.
YOU mix your words so well!!! So then - what ARE your precepts of immortality?

Oh Hoot and Michael - a double E is a word or phrase with two meanings - the hidden one is usually sexually suggestive.
HAHA Chris - I beat you!!!

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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6 posted 1999-10-21 12:01 PM

Excellent, Christopher. If we didn't exercise that belief, life would be a sorry state of affairs. Happiness is belief in the unbelievable.

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