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Axiomatic Precept *Double Entendre*(Repost)

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Christopher
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0 posted 10-20-1999 03:21 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

Burdened by a rail of hopes,
and countless dreams of morality-
mankind lies buried,
beneath a divagation of timeless mis-conceptions.
What can and cannot be.
We are hindered,
impededed by the fear-
of our own imaginations.

Prone to push our limits,
yet doomed never to succeed.

And yet we can

-BELIEVE-

that across the threshold of the unknown,
lies true understanding
-of the past that is our future-
-and the tomorrow that is our destiny-

For splashed across the realms,
of endless possibilities,
-lay the precepts of immortality.
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 10-20-1999 07:07 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Wow!...Great read says a smiling Rainbow.

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Watcher666
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2 posted 10-20-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

FANTASTIC!! Loved it!Well done Wolf!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-20-1999 04:37 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey Chris, I'm really not sure what a "Double Entendre", but I am sure of one thing......regardless, this is a good piece of poetry!
Michael
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4 posted 10-20-1999 04:48 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Yeah, Chris,
I'm with Hoot on this one...What the heck is a "Double Entendre", you just made that up to confuse me, huh? Very powerful piece,

Prone to push our limits,
yet doomed never to succeed.

Those two lines are a poem by themselves.



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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Severn
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5 posted 10-20-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

WOW - I missed this before dear. Awesome.
YOU mix your words so well!!! So then - what ARE your precepts of immortality?

Oh Hoot and Michael - a double E is a word or phrase with two meanings - the hidden one is usually sexually suggestive.
HAHA Chris - I beat you!!!
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6 posted 10-21-1999 12:01 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent, Christopher. If we didn't exercise that belief, life would be a sorry state of affairs. Happiness is belief in the unbelievable.
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