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A little kiss
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A little kiss |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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A kiss, so sweet like magic glows our lips, to meet the feeling grows The warmth, so close I feel it now this little dose to me endowed What do I feel? my mind is blank is this for real? these blinding ranks? Your lips to mine so soft and wet there is no "time" in this "duet" Cant see, cant think cant breath or know just for that "blink" it stops the "show" You just cant miss you've set me free with the little kiss you've given me ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nothing like a Kiss to stop time! Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very sweet.....brought a smile to my lips Thunder..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thunder..the imagery in this one brought a smile to my face. The rhythm and rhyme are both perfect. Well done! ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Watcher666 - Thank you very much  Pepper - Thank you, Im glad to hear it. Hoot - Thank you very much as well...I am glad to make you smile too Your comments and replies are greatly appreciated, Thanks much! ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well done! I think you captured the feeling accurately - it only time could stop! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ThunderKyss, loved this, I agree with Hoot, just perfect ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Severn and Dark Angel... Thank you both very much for the comments. Greatly appreciated |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, this is sweet! ------------------ Denise |
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