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A little kiss

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 10-20-1999 02:38 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

A kiss, so sweet
like magic glows
our lips, to meet
the feeling grows

The warmth, so close
I feel it now
this little dose
to me endowed

What do I feel?
my mind is blank
is this for real?
these blinding ranks?

Your lips to mine
so soft and wet
there is no "time"
in this "duet"

Cant see, cant think
cant breath or know
just for that "blink"
it stops the "show"

You just cant miss
you've set me free
with the little kiss
you've given me

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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-20-1999 10:00 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nothing like a Kiss to stop time! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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2 posted 10-20-1999 11:10 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very sweet.....brought a smile to my lips Thunder.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-20-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thunder..the imagery in this one brought a smile to my face. The rhythm and rhyme are both perfect. Well done!

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides
ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 10-20-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Watcher666 - Thank you very much

Pepper - Thank you, Im glad to hear it.

Hoot - Thank you very much as well...I am glad to make you smile too

Your comments and replies are greatly appreciated, Thanks much!

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
Severn
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5 posted 10-21-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well done! I think you captured the feeling accurately - it only time could stop!
Dark Angel
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6 posted 10-21-1999 01:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

ThunderKyss, loved this, I agree with Hoot, just perfect

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


ThUnDeRkYsS
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7 posted 10-21-1999 06:16 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Severn and Dark Angel... Thank you both very much for the comments. Greatly appreciated
Denise
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8 posted 10-23-1999 09:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, this is sweet!

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Denise
 
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