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Ixtab
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 1999-10-20 01:54 AM


As i see my hands unfold
touch the edge of rivers flow
not here or there the water ripples
yet to come and gone through my touch

When i see your eyes, there comes that glow
that shines my soul that tells me Know
that it's beauty, just like our sun's
will set one day, and come back more

I see a tree, not standing like a stone
but dancing at the wind's gentle lull
growing, flowering, breathing our waste
giving back that which is our second food

Live in bleek yesterday, sad tomorrow
has sowed my soul with nothing
but the awarness, like having found a new home
that today is here forevermore.

© Copyright 1999 Ixtab - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-20 10:03 AM


Beautiful imagery.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-24 02:22 PM


Ditto!

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Denise

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