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The Finality

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Kitty**
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0 posted 10-19-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

The Finality

It's really sad when:
tomorrow, has no hope in store.
When dreams are crushed, wishes
denied, and your will to live, is no more.

It really hurts when:
you're rejected, and left to find your own way.
With no one to share, the good or the bad,
or to listen, to what you have to say.

It's really lonely when:
you need to be held, with no arms there to hold you.
So you laugh alone, and dry your own tears,
And try to make, this way of life do.

But, It's total despair when:
You see no way out, knowing this is all there will be.
Today, forever, and for always,
Until your soul, is finally set free.
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-19-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

Wow. I'm speechless, this was so great. To me it seems like you wrote this while looking into my heart. Thanks for sharing.
~Jess~
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2 posted 10-19-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

Blue Eyed Wanderer..
Thanks for reading this. I sincerely hope that things are better then this for you.
This was one of my "down" moments and I don't always feel this way..It feels so good
when I'm on the "up" after feeling this way.


After the tears, there is laughter!! ;-)

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Kitty**
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This is very good Kitty!

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