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Gennifer (Double Acrostic)

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Michael
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0 posted 10-19-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

Grandeur afloat in all you do, my angel of the silver wing.
Evening sings with dreams of you by gloried shores of beauty rare.
Ne'er been touched like this I know, kissing beneath the midnight sun.
No one before seemed to know how missing emotion was within.
In your eyes I have seen so much through hopes, through dreams of you and I.
Fly on these broken wings will I, to share your soul, give you my half.
Epigraph of our book of love, "Two restless hearts have found their peace."
Release I do my life to you, true to you always, Gennifer.


Michael Anderson

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Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

EAP

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-19-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-19-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Micheal....that is simply beautiful! Gennifer is a very lucky person to have you.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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2 posted 10-19-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This is beautiful Michael.. I am sure Gen will love it.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-19-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Michael, this is so very beautiful, Gennifer is indeed lucky to have you. Well written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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4 posted 10-19-1999 06:50 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Absolutely Beautiful.Lucky Lady you have!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Craig
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5 posted 10-19-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Well done, this form of poetry is hard enough to do without the added difficulty of the internal message.

Superb.

Liked the Poe quote too and I am more than glad that this poem didnít creep through my fingers to the deep.


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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


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6 posted 10-19-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

She's gonna love it Michael!!

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Christopher
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7 posted 10-19-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Who's flexing who's poetic muscles??? Hmmm?
Balladeer
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8 posted 10-19-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Extremely clever and well done, Michael
Sally S.
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9 posted 10-19-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Gosh! You just keep getting better! What an innoative way to express your love. This must have took a bit of time. Know what?? You're both lucky to have eachother. It's so sweet!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 10-19-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, if this doesn't make her swoon.....nothing will. Lovely!!
poetFemmeFatale
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11 posted 10-19-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

** Swoon, swoon swoon! ** (grin) WOW ! Talk about knowing how to impress a woman ! There is no wonder I fell head over heels for you....with talent and the will to write like that, you have certainly stolen this girl's heart...I love you....thanks for all the blood, sweat and tears that went into this exquisite piece! You make me proud, to call you mine.....***** kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Denise
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12 posted 10-19-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ummmm...Michael, HOW IN THE HECK DID YOU EVER DO THIS? Are you like some kind of genius or something?!!!!!!

EXCELLENT!!!!!! (...oooops, sorry for shouting) BUT THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

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Denise
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13 posted 10-20-1999 12:48 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This is truly a marvel my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

poetFemmeFatale
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14 posted 10-20-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This deserves to be on page # 1 !! (I'm not partial, ya know!) LOL So here goes........(kick) - - - -
WhtDove
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15 posted 10-20-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Michael this was fabulous! Lot of work here, and touching.
Femme I think you're partial (LOL), but I agree with ya. It belongs on top!
Alwye
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16 posted 10-21-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, awesome...this is gorgeous, and deserves to be at the top!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

JennyLee
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17 posted 10-22-1999 05:58 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Truly an awesome piece of work here Michael.
Gennifer is blessed to have you,(as I'm sure she knows) As always great job.


Jenny

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).]
 
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