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Day Dream

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far
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0 posted 10-19-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for far   Email far   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for far

Thoughts of you...
Thinking that you love me too...
have never seen you...
but the feelings...
with your thoughts in my mind...
everytime i close my eyes...
you appear and place my head on your lap...
your hands playing with my hairs...
i look in to your deep eyes...
and enjoy your beautiful smile...
with the star shining behind your petals...
then i hear a sound...
calming than the sound of silence...
beautiful than songs of angels...
like a bell rings in temple far away...
you speak up and say...
....................
i open my eyes but you're gone...
leaving me here all alone....


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life's a ocean of fire which we have to swim through...

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1 posted 10-19-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I like it very much, It is very wistful and a bit melancholy.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
 
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