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My Curddling Halloween

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WhtDove
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0 posted 10-19-1999 03:52 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

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The screams I heard on Halloween
Made me a nervous wreck.
The shreiks came out so eerily
The hair stood on my neck.

For two years straight I've heard that sound
That stood my hair on end.
And, when I walked home late tonight
I heard it once again.

Real scared, I stopped and looked around
There's nothing I could see.
A cold chill then ran up my spine
There's something touching me.

I froze there for a moment, then
I quickly spun around.
My knees were shaking terribly
My voice would make no sound.

I felt a cold and clammy hand
Brush up against my face.
But when I looked into the eyes
There was a vacant space.

Two gaping holes where eyes once were
My blood froze in my veins.
That's when I got a real good look
At what's called Long John's brains.

There was this green slime oozing out
And dripping through his eyes.
Those eerie shreiks I heard that night
Were Long John's pitiful cries.

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Toerag
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1 posted 10-19-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nice job there Dove....but yanno, he does have terrible sinus problems also....that may not have been slime?.....But he is scarey..that's a sure thing!
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-19-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

LOL.....too cute!

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Systematic Decay
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3 posted 10-19-1999 04:32 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

LOL, I'll be sure not to walk outside at night alone anymore.

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Poet deVine
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4 posted 10-19-1999 05:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

LOVE it! You did a good job on both the graphics and the poem!!!
WhtDove
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5 posted 10-19-1999 05:36 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks all for your replies!

Toe, it didn't start out that way, just how it seemed to end. Poor guy that LJ!! LOL
I thought about adding something like that in, but just couldn't make it fit. LOL
WhtDove
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6 posted 10-19-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you very much PdV that means a lot! You snuck in here on me! I thought I was gonna scream at what I went through to get these graphics in here I tell ya! Oh no, that was LJ, I forgot! LOL...

Toe, Watcher, S.D I thank you all!
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7 posted 10-19-1999 05:56 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

LOL I loved it Wthdove, ALL of it ! : )
Dark Angel
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8 posted 10-19-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is terrific WhtDove, enjoyed the read

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9 posted 10-19-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Wonderfully done WhtDove. Your talent always amazes me.
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10 posted 10-19-1999 08:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, LongJohn, even the doves call ya green slime. I've always considered you a wonderful person myself. Scary, sure, but with style.

Good poem, Dove...and a brilliant expose.
WhtDove
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Thanks so much Munda.

D.A. thanks girl! Glad you enjoyed it!

Marilyn, that's quite the compliment! Thank you very much!
WhtDove
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Balladeer you snuck in on me too!
Thanks, for that means a lot coming from you buddy!
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13 posted 10-19-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great! I wasn't expecting to end like that!

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I see after all the trouble you had, you finally got it to work. Well worth the trouble I think! Great poem! I love it LoL...though are you sure it wasn't me J/K


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WhtDove
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Denise thank you! I thought I'd give a shot at something I don't normally do. Glad you enjoyed it.

Echo, thank you for your sweet compliment. I'm sure it wasn't you Hon! LOL
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16 posted 10-20-1999 07:15 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Poor LJA...but thanks for the laughter..

HUGS

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hoot_owl_rn
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Whtdove....finally glad to see this thing come together for you. Nice job.....good for a laugh, or two
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Loved the surprise ending...love anything that brings a smile and graphics were great too.

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Christopher
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19 posted 10-20-1999 06:30 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

ROFL!!
Good one Dove!
It flowed easily, and even had a twist on the end!
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Great time for goolies and things that go bump in the night. I enjoyed this alot.
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Boo to you, too.
WhtDove
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Rainbow I agree, poor LJA. I was gonna use Toe but I just couldn't! LOL...naw, really it just ended up that way, I was gonna do a serious one.

Thanks Hoot, appreciate it always!

Thanks for the compliment WildChild, I had a rough time getting them to work. Glad you liked them!

Christopher thanks much! That is different for me! Glad you got a kick out of it.

Martie, yes it is that time of year. I hope to see some others write some Halloween ones.
Thanks for the reply.

Soleil...guess I should explain why I am going to say Eek. Everytime someone says Boo, I always just answered Eek, just incase you all didn't understand. Thanks!
WhtDove
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24 posted 10-31-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

LOL....loved the effects too!

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