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I'm so sad..:-(

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 10-19-1999 01:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I hate the way I feel and the smile that doesn't disguise the tears
the way I want to hide from the memories of these last few years
why does my brain persist in throwing up images of happier times
why am I always reminded of the perfect track, lyrics and rhyme

and then I think of all that I believe in and tell myself I really am pathetic
go make yourself smile remember who you are and go and be poetic
so here I am trying to do just that but it's never quite that easy is it?
I'm a persistent little wench and when life isn't easy you just can't quit

So I'm resorting to boring all of you who think of me as a cheerful little soul
but just in case you're thinking " Rainbow, where is your self-control ! "
I should probably make it clear why I'm feeling so sad and neglected
They promised me my replacement CD and it's NOT even been collected..

As you can tell being confined and bored is starting to tell on me..*g*

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 10-19-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

sending HUGS your way RG.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Iloveit
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2 posted 10-19-1999 01:30 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, my very own wench teacher your persistance pays off poetically, those first 2 lines and then the last are killer, if I have to write poems as good as you to become a wench, I don't think I am gonna make it *g* will just have to be a "stand in wench" for when you need a smile
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3 posted 10-19-1999 02:06 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I was crying and laughing at the same time. lol

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Marilyn
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4 posted 10-19-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Bore us? When you are happy you shine upon us. Why would we even think about not doing the same for you when you need it. Let us shine some sun down on you friend. Let that sun dry those tears and if we are lucky we might create a rainbow....
RobertB
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5 posted 10-19-1999 03:17 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

just when I was really starting to feel sorry for you.....then you made me smile

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Toerag
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6 posted 10-19-1999 03:27 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I doubt anyone here has known this fine lady as long as I have....nor what turmoil her life has been. And through all the heartache, tears and "letdowns"...she never ceases to amaze me, or offer hugs, advice, and friendship....This is one very remarkable, intelligent, and dear dear lady! (And, she has the most beautiful eyes you've ever laid yours on!!!)
Systematic Decay
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7 posted 10-19-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

AWWW, poor girl...

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 10-19-1999 03:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'll let you into a secret...I hate to be sad even when I am so I changed the last line to something I hoped would make someone smile ...but Toe's post meant I had to confess..I do get sad but hopefully I try to see happiness through the tears...it's as if I argue with myself..on the one hand, life is too short to be sad but on the other, you have to be receptive and that naturally means you will have both happiness and sadness - I just wish I could equal out the ratio a little..

Thanks Darling...I may be wrong but I think to own up to sadness is as good as owning up to being happy...both means you feel...(and that isn't your slot for something rude..*g*

see, we just can't help ourselves..always trying to laugh, aren't we?

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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9 posted 10-19-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I can't really respond to this one, Rainbow, except to say I wish you all the happiness there is. You deserve it for what you have endured and for what you do for others. HUSG!
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10 posted 10-19-1999 09:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You always shine, Rainbow!

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