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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-10-19 10:52 AM


I'm living my life inside out and now I'm upside down
inside a basket I'm tangled up with something brown
soon I'll be tumbled about in that awful washing machine
at least I'll come out smelling all nice fresh and clean

I'll then be hung upon a line to bask in all this sunshine
no stains remaining including that spilt glass of wine
lying here all wrinkled I'm placed upon an ironing board
with skillful hands I've been taken care of and lovingly restored

Will I get a hanger or be laid on something soft inside a drawer
waiting for the right occasion when I'll be taken out and worn once more
Just think I could have been a pair of socks and have no secrets to confess
and will it be for a friend or lover that I'll be chosen - a simple little dress

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-10-19 10:55 AM


This is so cute!
LOL
(and if you find where you put your mind, see if mine's there too!)

HUGS

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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2 posted 1999-10-19 10:57 AM


yea, but if your were a pair of socks, ya'd be rubbing up against a toerag yanno?....Well done...cute poem Brit....
Pepper
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3 posted 1999-10-19 11:04 AM


Delightful RG......lol

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Iloveit
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4 posted 1999-10-19 11:06 AM


oh gosh I love this, and *sigh* I know just what you mean, but *you* are far from "a simple little dress" .....hugs, great poem
suthern
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5 posted 1999-10-19 11:06 AM


Cute poem, Brit! Well done! Now as for the title... (puzzled look) I didn't know you had one??? *G*
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-10-19 11:17 AM


Chris: I shan't even try and tell you what it started out as...LOL

Toe: Damn!..I always end up washing my socks in pairs but when I come to pair them up, I'm always missing one - it's you, you keep mating with my socks...ROFL

Pepper: Thanks sweetheart..

ILoveit: Now then if I was a dress would I choose buttons or a zip...hmmm..food for thought..(thanks)

Suthern: Listen here cheeky...ROFLMAO

Group HUGS today

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Balladeer
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7 posted 1999-10-19 08:52 PM


If I use a little softener on you, will you come clean with me? We'll go for a ride on my spin cycle!! Maybe a little huggie. Oh, stop, Bal, stop!!!!!!!! (too much starch in my shorts this morning)

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I do what my rice krispies tell me to...



Denise
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8 posted 1999-10-19 10:12 PM


This is so cute!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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9 posted 1999-10-20 07:54 AM


Balladeer: ROFL@I do what my rice krispies tell me to...does that mean you're snapping, crackling and popping?...oh my..*g*

HUSG

dsnyder: Thanks sweetheart..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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10 posted 1999-10-20 09:44 AM


Liked this one! Cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 1999-10-20 12:00 PM


RG...I'd help you out, but it seems I've misplaced mine somewhere too. Maybe it's in CA where the rest of me longs to be right now
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