Oh my, I am sitting here fighting back tears with this piece. You have done a wonderful job. The flow is good, the feelings and emotions this stirs unbelievable. At first I thought maybe she was leaving him, when I got to the end it nearly broke my heart. Excellent poem, thanks for sharing. If this grief is but your own, my thoughts and prayers are with you.
Something I too think about from time to time I know I am growing older and so is the man I love... It's going to be so hard to let him go...whether it be me or him going first... But I pray we will have had enough days!!! To make memories to last the rest of our days..
Beautiful!!! sad, but real amd what else is life, but many experiences?