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A Sad Poem

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sweetnsxy
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0 posted 10-19-1999 02:30 AM       View Profile for sweetnsxy   Email sweetnsxy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetnsxy

I found this poem.

God saw you getting tired,
A cure was not to be.
He puts his arms around you,
And whispered "Come with me."
With tearful eyes, we watched you suffer,
And saw you fade away.
Although we loved you dearly,
We could not ask you to stay.
Many times we think of you,
And many times we cried.
If love alone could have saved you,
You never would have died.
A heart of gold stopped beating,
Two shining eyes at rest.
God broke our hearts to prove,
He only takes the best.
May the lord make up for all the suffering,
And keep you in his care;
May the lord now help us to cope,
With all that seems unfair.

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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-19-1999 02:37 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

very eloquent and beautiful...nice

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-19-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A nice poem, if you find the author, let me know
sweetnsxy
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3 posted 10-19-1999 02:55 PM       View Profile for sweetnsxy   Email sweetnsxy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetnsxy

Thanks you guys. I really thought it was beautiful myself. I will let you know Hoot Owl.
Toerag
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4 posted 10-19-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

This too reminds me of my parents...well done, nice poem...even if ya just found it, posting it kinda shows what kind of person ya are.....
Pepper
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5 posted 10-19-1999 03:10 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Thanks for sharing.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 10-19-1999 03:12 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Oh boy...more tears...don't my eyes sparkle enough?...

I guess I'm just too sad today...

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-19-1999).]
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7 posted 10-19-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you for posting it, sweetnsexy. It can easily be related to.
Denise
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8 posted 10-19-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, thanks so much. This is lovely!

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Denise
sweetnsxy
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9 posted 10-20-1999 03:19 AM       View Profile for sweetnsxy   Email sweetnsxy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetnsxy

Thanks. This one really touched my heart too. And thank you Toerag.
Watcher666
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10 posted 10-20-1999 10:43 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful.Thank-You for sharing.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
sweetnsxy
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11 posted 10-21-1999 02:52 AM       View Profile for sweetnsxy   Email sweetnsxy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetnsxy

You are all very welcome. I'm glad I could share this.
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