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Pleading For Nothingness.......( comments welcome.)

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Moonshine
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0 posted 10-19-1999 02:21 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

The silence pierces me,
As I sit in this darkness,
Cold reaching all around me,
Knifelike fingers plunging,
Wickedly entangling themselves,
In my broken soul,
Cutting me to pieces,
And slicing away,
My final sliver of hope,
Alone I am,
My wounded heart pleading,
To stop thudding,
Inside my empty chest,
I envite death,
I challenge death,
I scream to death,
To sweep over me,
And numb my pain,
So I can end,
And finally fade away.......
© Copyright 1999 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-19-1999 02:39 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I've laid in bed so many nights and had these very same thoughts. I hope things get better for you.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Moonshine
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2 posted 10-19-1999 10:56 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear SD,

Thanx for your reply - this poem is one that I wrote a long time ago but because of some things that are happening for me now I read it and decided to post it. You say you've shared the same thoughts huh? I hope that you also feel good and not crappy : )
Iloveit
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3 posted 10-19-1999 01:35 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, I don't scream for death, I hang on to life too much for that. I have a different reflex when things get that bad, I just pretend they aren't and bury the yesterdays, but I recognize the agony, and I too hope things are better for the both of you
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 10-19-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I hope that whatever the problem was/is...you're seeing life a little differently and I smile a wry smile here..:-)

Big hugs though..You can borrow my ears anytime but I warn you, I shall probably try to make you smile..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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5 posted 10-19-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Only once in my life have I begged for death. Since that time I have clung to life and hope. I understand the pain in your words. There is always hope...always. Anytime you need an ear please feel free to use mine.
Dark Angel
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6 posted 10-19-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine Honey,I am here for you, you know that, and please don't hesitate if you need me loved your poem. ((((HUGS))))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Watcher666
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7 posted 10-19-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much,your feelings are well expressed.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Moonshine
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8 posted 10-20-1999 05:19 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear ILoveIt,

Thanx for your reply.I too used to bury things and bottle up my feelings but I did it for so long that I can't do it anymore. Now I am trying to deal with things and writing dark poems like this helps me to get those feelings out.
Moonshine
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9 posted 10-20-1999 05:22 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear RainbowGirl,

Thanx for your reply. The poem was written quite some time ago but I read it last night and decided to post it cause I'm having a hard time with something at the moment. Thanx for your support - I will be OK : )
Moonshine
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10 posted 10-20-1999 05:24 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Marilyn,

The poem is old but I thought I'd post it cause I'm going through some not so nice stuff at the moment - I'm OK though. What you wrote was very sweet - thankyou.
Moonshine
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11 posted 10-20-1999 05:27 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx DA - you are truly a beautiful person. Thanx for being so sweet.
Moonshine
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12 posted 10-20-1999 05:28 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Watcher666,

THanx for your lovely comment.
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