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When Best Friends Love (Best Bud Challenge)

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Justbleu
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25 posted 12-07-2001 09:04 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I sat here in awe of this....then as I scroll down to respond realize I've been this way before.  I enjoyed this very much even the second time!!!!!

Wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!

Bridgette  
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26 posted 12-10-2001 03:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Cor   Email Elizabeth Cor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Cor

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27 posted 02-14-2006 04:06 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A good day to bring this one back, I think !  Happy Valentine's Day, Ron!!
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28 posted 02-15-2006 12:58 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Good grief!  I want you to know I actually did sit here the entire time to read it until I finished it, and glad I did.  Brother, that is more than I think we've heard out of you in years Ron.     I liked this a ton, so much truth in this one sentence.


I've spent much of my life in love with love,
searching for the fulfillment of a concept,
caring more for caring than caring for another person.


Sadly that is a true story for far too many people.  
Drauntz
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29 posted 06-12-2007 06:07 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

wonderful,wonderful, your best poem.
deeply from heart and from life.

yep, true friendship grows like this. and love,is soooo sweet here in your poem.

wonderful piece.
TomMark
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30 posted 12-05-2007 12:31 AM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

Read again. This is truly one of your life story and you opened the page to let us to read. I wonder how many times have been in love? Wonderful life experience if  not hurt as equal.  
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31 posted 12-05-2007 05:43 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"And, yes, I love your beauty, shallow as that may sound.
I love the way your eyes change from blue to blue-green,
the way the morning sun catches afire in your hair,
the way your nostrils move when you breathe deep breaths,
the way your tongue slips out of its safe harbor when you think deep thoughts.
I love the curve of your cheek,
that soft milky canvas for the faint scar you won't talk about.
I love your tiny eyelashes, the small gaps in your teeth,
the way your earlobes hang lower than mine.
Your beauty truly takes my breath away."


I don't remember ever reading this..but I haven't been here from the very beginning~~~

every  bit of this is special and endearing...I singled out this part only ...because I  was touched by the tenderness~~


Maureen

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32 posted 05-06-2009 03:32 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Sometimes poetry just rises to the top.  To me, this is one of those poems.  I savored each word I read and found myself leaning so far into it that my nose was almost touching the screen.  I was even wearing my glasses.

Wonderful writing and wonderful reading.

A
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33 posted 05-06-2009 04:12 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"the way your tongue slips out of its safe harbor when you think deep thoughts."

My favorite line.

But then, it would be, wouldn't it?

(It's sexy--not just because it's tongue--you're like, watching her, she didn't SAY anything, and you just assumed she was thinking "deep thoughts"--and I think that's cute. She might have just been licking some lobster sauce off of her lip--I mean, what do we know?)

*chuckle*

too sweet, but ditch that hat, will ya?

 
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