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Open Poetry #3

UNTITLED(just thinking)

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-18 07:39 PM

I wished upon a star
last night, wondering
who you are.
And an answer was denied,
seeing how, you had lied,
once again.

You left my heart broken,
with tears to always weep.
Words were left unsaid
simply because you didn't
have the courage to
speak them.

My mind is now filled
with thoughts of you,
of our love, of passionate
nights under the moon
and stars.

Memories haunt me. Dreams
re-occur in a tormenting
pattern. Causing me to
have a disbelieve in any
form of the thing that we
once called "LOVE".

You changed my world. I
thought I knew you, but
I guess I didn't. And
I don't see that I ever
will.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-18 08:00 PM

Very sad, Lynn. Heartbreaking, and well expressed.

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Denise

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-18 08:16 PM

Such heartfelt writing Lynn.
Thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-10-18 08:33 PM

A wonderful display of emotion.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-10-18 10:06 PM

Thanks everyone for the responses. I felt that this is one of worse poems, but the comments make me feel good about it. Thanks Again......

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

5 posted 1999-10-19 02:45 AM

Very heartbreaking, with a touch of melancholie. Very beautiful, though.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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