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UNTITLED(just thinking)

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Lynn
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0 posted 10-18-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn



I wished upon a star
last night, wondering
who you are.
And an answer was denied,
seeing how, you had lied,
once again.

You left my heart broken,
with tears to always weep.
Words were left unsaid
simply because you didn't
have the courage to
speak them.

My mind is now filled
with thoughts of you,
of our love, of passionate
nights under the moon
and stars.

Memories haunt me. Dreams
re-occur in a tormenting
pattern. Causing me to
have a disbelieve in any
form of the thing that we
once called "LOVE".

You changed my world. I
thought I knew you, but
I guess I didn't. And
I don't see that I ever
will.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-18-1999 08:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Lynn. Heartbreaking, and well expressed.

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Such heartfelt writing Lynn.
Thanks for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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3 posted 10-18-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A wonderful display of emotion.
Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


4 posted 10-18-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Thanks everyone for the responses. I felt that this is one of worse poems, but the comments make me feel good about it. Thanks Again......

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Systematic Decay
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5 posted 10-19-1999 02:45 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Very heartbreaking, with a touch of melancholie. Very beautiful, though.

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