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Open Poetry #3

loosing the grip of all

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-10-18 05:34 PM

Lost in a place
That is near, but far

Lost in a time
That days forget

Lost in imagination
That we must imagine

Lost in a world
That is seen, not touched

Lost in the unreal
That is a break from reality

Lost in dreams
That make us wonder

Lost in sleep
That gives us peace.

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-18 05:49 PM

oh...I do like this one and it indeed likes me

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 1999-10-18 06:11 PM

Very nice... I enjoyed.

U K Hero
Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 266
England

3 posted 1999-10-18 06:59 PM

Very deep and well thought out...

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

4 posted 1999-10-18 07:38 PM

A very good read. Well done.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-10-18 07:40 PM

I enjoyed reading....Very good poem!

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

6 posted 1999-10-18 08:53 PM

thank you all for taking the time to reply to this one! I hope I can get more on here for your enjoyment.

"Ride, boldly ride" the shade replied, If you seek for Eldorodo.
-EAP

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-10-18 08:56 PM

Very good! I enjoyed this one!

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Denise

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