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wolfie97
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0 posted 10-18-1999 05:34 PM       View Profile for wolfie97   Email wolfie97   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit wolfie97's Home Page   View IP for wolfie97


Lost in a place
That is near, but far

Lost in a time
That days forget

Lost in imagination
That we must imagine

Lost in a world
That is seen, not touched

Lost in the unreal
That is a break from reality

Lost in dreams
That make us wonder

Lost in sleep
That gives us peace.

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-18-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

oh...I do like this one and it indeed likes me

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides
Mike
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2 posted 10-18-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice... I enjoyed.
U K Hero
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3 posted 10-18-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Very deep and well thought out...
caroline
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4 posted 10-18-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

A very good read. Well done.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Lynn
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5 posted 10-18-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

I enjoyed reading....Very good poem!
wolfie97
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6 posted 10-18-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for wolfie97   Email wolfie97   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit wolfie97's Home Page   View IP for wolfie97

thank you all for taking the time to reply to this one! I hope I can get more on here for your enjoyment.

"Ride, boldly ride" the shade replied, If you seek for Eldorodo.
-EAP

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall
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7 posted 10-18-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good! I enjoyed this one!

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