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Will You Still Whisper In The Night?

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tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 10-18-1999 03:20 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Will you still whisper in the night
Will you still wish that things were right
Will I still remain your number one
Or is this affair really done

Will my friendship still remain dear
When you hear the songs we use to hear
Will you still be dreaming of holding me near
Or is this unnecessary fears

Is my heart just searching for the truth
I feel suspended in past youth
Feelings I thought that I'd out grown
Bring new feelings I have never known
Is this just a thing that's in the past
That dreams are made not to last

What seems so real just slips away
Forgotten with the light of day
And when the night comes creeping in
Will you come, no more my friend
Is this too much I'm hoping for
Shall I not open, my hearts door
Will the birds not sing for me again
Shall pain and tears live with-in


Is this forbidden dreams I hold
Is hope to frail, as to see right through
Can I no longer count on you
Confused with questions tossed with-in
I feel that I have lost again
As friendships best is at its end
Has reality come alas
Is this life we planned far from never
Am I left alone to think what-ever
Will you still whisper in the night?

Tori © 1999

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.
© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-18-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Tori, this has a very longing lonely quality about it. I hope the answer to your question is the one you want!

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Denise
tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


2 posted 10-18-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks Denise, just a poem at wee hours in the morning lol... strange where the mind wonders...
WhtDove
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3 posted 10-21-1999 10:26 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey Tori, what's with all the sad poetry my friend? This about made me cry. The mind certainly does wander. It's funny cause for some reason I just think a women's mind goes so deep, so many things that race through it. Hope things are ok for ya! If ya need to talk just email me. (((((((HUGS)))))))
tori
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4 posted 10-21-1999 08:10 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

WhtDove
If you met me in person you would not believe I could write this kind of stuff.. just a thought in the middle of the night
Everything is aok here.. could not have put an add in the paper and held interview's and got better then my cassanova.hehehe. good ole Ed... :-)but thanks my friend.. nice to know your out there!!!
Watcher666
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5 posted 10-22-1999 12:28 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad,but lovely. Very well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
starchild
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6 posted 10-22-1999 12:32 PM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

i read it and thiught about it and thought it was good and then thought about it again and then thought about other things it made me think of and then liked it even more
tori
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7 posted 10-22-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks you Watcher I'm glad you enjoyed it..
Starchild..... Thanks so much you have truly let me know that I've done well..

"If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink!!"
©vlh 1980
passing shadows
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8 posted 05-04-2004 04:06 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this is painful...but beautiful
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