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Will You Still Whisper In The Night?
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Will You Still Whisper In The Night? |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Will you still whisper in the night Will you still wish that things were right Will I still remain your number one Or is this affair really done Will my friendship still remain dear When you hear the songs we use to hear Will you still be dreaming of holding me near Or is this unnecessary fears Is my heart just searching for the truth I feel suspended in past youth Feelings I thought that I'd out grown Bring new feelings I have never known Is this just a thing that's in the past That dreams are made not to last What seems so real just slips away Forgotten with the light of day And when the night comes creeping in Will you come, no more my friend Is this too much I'm hoping for Shall I not open, my hearts door Will the birds not sing for me again Shall pain and tears live with-in Is this forbidden dreams I hold Is hope to frail, as to see right through Can I no longer count on you Confused with questions tossed with-in I feel that I have lost again As friendships best is at its end Has reality come alas Is this life we planned far from never Am I left alone to think what-ever Will you still whisper in the night? Tori © 1999 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tori, this has a very longing lonely quality about it. I hope the answer to your question is the one you want!  ------------------ Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Denise, just a poem at wee hours in the morning lol... strange where the mind wonders... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Tori, what's with all the sad poetry my friend? This about made me cry. The mind certainly does wander. It's funny cause for some reason I just think a women's mind goes so deep, so many things that race through it. Hope things are ok for ya! If ya need to talk just email me. (((((((HUGS))))))) |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
WhtDove If you met me in person you would not believe I could write this kind of stuff.. just a thought in the middle of the night Everything is aok here.. could not have put an add in the paper and held interview's and got better then my cassanova.hehehe. good ole Ed... :-)but thanks my friend.. nice to know your out there!!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sad,but lovely. Very well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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starchild Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 59manchester, england |
i read it and thiught about it and thought it was good and then thought about it again and then thought about other things it made me think of and then liked it even more |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks you Watcher I'm glad you enjoyed it.. Starchild..... Thanks so much you have truly let me know that I've done well.. "If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink!!" ©vlh 1980 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is painful...but beautiful |
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