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tulip
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0 posted 10-18-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I used to feel
the sun that shined,
the wind that blew,
the peace of mine.
But instead
I only wait,
I watch the time,
Just pass away.
I only feel
the dead inside,
the pain just sits,
the memories blind.
What can I do
to look and see
the beauty
I once had seen?
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Severn
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1 posted 10-18-1999 12:59 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

So sad...
tis well written, tulip - I hope you find that beauty soon.
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2 posted 10-18-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Severn,
It's hard when you know the beauty that's out there, but you don't have it!!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-18-1999 01:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

this is very nice Tulip, but also very sad. well done

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4 posted 10-18-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Tulip!

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5 posted 10-20-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

dsnyder & dark angel,
Thanks for your input...
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-21-1999 08:55 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done....look for the beauty inside,then the outside becomes clear.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Pepper
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7 posted 10-21-1999 09:16 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I like the wisdom in Watcher's reply.
Good piece tulip......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 10-21-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tulip,
Enjoyed the read, well done.
dave appleby
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9 posted 10-21-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for dave appleby   Email dave appleby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dave appleby

tulip i think your write well and pass the meaning fluently, maybe if you let everything go then more will come back than if you just hold on to what you know
tulip
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10 posted 10-23-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Hey All-
In looking around me, I feel so "un-innocent" in comparison to the people that surround me. I guess it's just a matter of perception.
hoot_owl_rn
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Tulip...this is well written and nicely stated. I'm glad you shared
 
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