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The fading seasons

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Master
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0 posted 10-18-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

A stream of light attracts me closer
Against the current, to the pane
Where in the abyss of a poster
The autumn bleeds in drops of rain
The rain plays drums upon my window
In wild passion, stormy moans
The raging wind sets sounds into
Aligned rows of nature’s notes
By which the weather plays in ardor
To which the branches gently sway
The hand of time strikes harder, harder
As seasons softly fade away


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 10-18-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I can feel the weather in this one! I like the way you used 'softly' in the last line, it really stands out against the raging imagery throughout.
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-18-1999 12:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful Master, very nicely written. I love the imagery and symbolism in this piece
Master
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3 posted 10-18-1999 01:01 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Severn and Hoot! I wrote this in about ten minutes, but I really think it came out good. Glad you liked it!
Denise
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4 posted 10-18-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Master. I liked the feel of this one!

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Master
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5 posted 10-18-1999 10:15 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Denise!
 
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