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Needs NOT Met

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Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


0 posted 10-17-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Needs Not Met


We made love last night,
in the darkness of his room.
We let the feelings of desire,
that we had locked up, loose.
His body was soft and calm,
irresistible, and even loving.

I shook from nervousness,
for I knew it was wrong.
He doesn't love me
the way I love him.
I couldn't get this thought
of out of my mind.

He was the one I had craved.
The one I always wanted.
But I didn't want us to come
together like this.
In a sexual rage, drunken
by the desire of our own wants.

And as soon as the act
was finally completed,
I quietly walked to another
room and cried over his love.
For his desires were met,
but mine were left untouched.

All I wanted was for him
to love me in a heartfelt way.
To have feelings for me,
other than want.
I know I ask for a lot,
but can he not need me.

Can he not need to feel
my touch, like I need feel his.
Can he not see how much
I need him in troubled times.
Can he not feel when I'm
hurting and suffering.

All I wanted from him was
a connection between us.
All I needed was a love that
lasted longer than one night.
All I craved was him to touch
me with a small bit of feelings.

We made love last night,
in the darkness of his room.
And let the feelings of desire,
that we had locked up, loose.
But only he was granted
satisfaction from the action that occurred.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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1 posted 10-17-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is so sad Lynn
Denise
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2 posted 10-17-1999 10:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nothing could be more heartbreaking, I'm sure, in the love department than a situation like this. So sad.

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Denise
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3 posted 10-17-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

heartfelt emotion brilliantly displayed.
Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


4 posted 10-17-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Thanks for the responses. I started not to post this poem, but now that I have, I'm happy I did. I've been having this terrible luck with guys here lately and that's what I've been writing about. This is the least emotional of most of them. I just seemed to be getting "used" a lot, and I'm upset about allowing myself to let it happen. But, thanks again for the responses. I apreciate it.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
wannabe_poet
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since 10-15-1999
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Markham, Ontario, Canada


5 posted 10-17-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

That is such a beautiful poem.. I know exactly where you stand. Your not alone on this. Good luck!

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Poet deVine
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6 posted 10-18-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent poem..very sad subject though as it's rough going through this.
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