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jac
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0 posted 10-17-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for jac   Email jac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jac

My mind is filled with 10,000 distortions. You shouldn't have told me what you did. The imp you once were long ago. She said no. Thank God she said no! Beware of whom is speaking. Let me purge all my emotions into your body. Why? You shouldn't have said that! watch my blood flow from all my wounds as I let you drink my salty tears like they're fresh water. Don't be angered. Please, don't be mad. Just help me out of all this hell.

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....ouch! This sounds quite painful.

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"Let me purge my emotions in your body" Oh, I do so like that line

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides
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