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jac
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since 1999-10-17
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0 posted 1999-10-17 04:16 PM


My mind is filled with 10,000 distortions. You shouldn't have told me what you did. The imp you once were long ago. She said no. Thank God she said no! Beware of whom is speaking. Let me purge all my emotions into your body. Why? You shouldn't have said that! watch my blood flow from all my wounds as I let you drink my salty tears like they're fresh water. Don't be angered. Please, don't be mad. Just help me out of all this hell.

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 1999-10-17 05:33 PM


....ouch! This sounds quite painful.

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-10-17 10:38 PM


"Let me purge my emotions in your body" Oh, I do so like that line

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides

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