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Thyme Limit- A Poem for Ron

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Justin Thyme
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0 posted 10-17-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Justin Thyme

Thyme Limit- A Poem for Ron


Some say we're fictional, but really we aren't,
we're actually REAL, just like you!
Too many Justins, some people have said,
but we wonder, what did we do?

We're here at the 'stute and we're having some fun
and we're dodging the Cratchet and Moose.
If you think that we're dangerous NOW, my friend,
just imagine if Justins were loose!

Now let me explain, it's important, you see,
there's plenty of us at the 'stute!
And not all of us in here are cousins and twins!
That statement, I'll Shirley Refute!

There's the good Dr. Moose and his old right hand Nurse,
a Cratchety mean kind of lass.
And the kind Unknown Poet and ol' sweet Van Gogh,
this 'stute has a whole lot of class!

We're surrounded by people who are very much REAL,
yet we're very Wizard-deprived!
We waited for him once... one weekend all year,
but the Wizard, he never arrived!

We searched through our e-mails and telephone lines,
for Announcements or some type of omen.
But soon we went crazy and Justins were born,
and the 'stute filled with multiple showmen.

We've patients and paint, but all Justins we ain't,
nope, there's much more than Justins in here!
There's Goethe and Pablo and Andrew and Toe,
and all of us REAL, it's quite clear.

I stopped by to read a discussion 'bout mail
and what did I find at the Forum?
The webmaster saying there's too many Justins....
I wondered how'd we ever bore 'im?

This doesn't make sense! I said to myself,
that Justin access could have bounds!
They keep us locked up in this place called the 'stute,
we're prisoners here in these gowns!

And now we are told there's too many of us?
But none of us here are the same!
Are we being punished 'cause our moms and dads,
decided to give the same name?

Well, back to the point of this short l'il rhyme,
there's lots of REAL people with me!
We like to write poems and short stories and such.
It's the only way we can be FREE!

If the Wizard had only showed up to the gig,
there's never be Justins, not ANY!
But here we all sit, crazy loons in a 'stute,
and the Wizard's complaining too many!


-Justin Thyme
aka Leonardo DaVinci

[This message has been edited by Justin Thyme (edited 10-17-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Justin Thyme - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-17-1999 04:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

hehehehehe! And if there were a limit placed, you guys are so ingenious you'd figure a way around it!!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-17-1999 04:25 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

A LIMIT!?!?!?

ON JUSTINS?!?!?!?

GIMME A BREAK!

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Marilyn
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3 posted 10-17-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I cast my vote with the justin's!! I don't think there are too many. I think the handles are very clever. Isn't it that creativity that we are trying to promote here? Just my two cents worth.
Justine Uff
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4 posted 10-17-1999 05:22 PM       View Profile for Justine Uff   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justine Uff

There's not too little
There's not too many
There's really Justine Uff

Justin Conceivable
And me
We're here to strut our stuff!!

We're such a riddle
We'll melt the meany
We got here Justin Thyme

We Justin Sist
Sit back and see
Us woo him with our rhyme

He shan't resist
Our Vamp-ery
He'll love us Justin Deed



Justin Thyme
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5 posted 10-17-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

Justine Uff! Is that MS. Justine Uff from Balladeer's house at that big party in 1982? Wow! Cool! Y'know, I never DID believe you were really his teacher. How ya been, baby doll? LOL.... thanks for responding to this Thyme Limit thingy... y'know, I think good ol' Ron was just foolin' around when he said there were too many Justins, don't you? Anyway, cool seein' ya again!

You ever see ol' Balladeer? He never stops by the 'stute to visit. I think he's scared that if he does, he'll be in here with the best of us.... I mean, the rest of us.

Toodle-oo for now, cupcake! Stay sweet.

JT
 
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