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The Game (Poet deVine's pantoum challenge, maybe Im posting a bit early but oh well)

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Systematic Decay
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0 posted 10-17-1999 10:19 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

The Game


Submission was the game
And oh, that game is fun
Belittled by the shame
And in the end, I won

And oh, that game is fun
Revenge is very sweet
And in the end, I won
Now I have fresh meat

Revenge is very sweet
Bitter as lost innocence
Now I have fresh meat
I'm laughing at your decadence

Bitter as lost innocence
Belittled by the shame
I'm laughing at your decadence
Submission was the game



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Pepper
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1 posted 10-17-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Great work here Sys.....
Really enjoyed this piece.....


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JennyLee
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2 posted 10-17-1999 12:00 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Very good...challenge well met.


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3 posted 10-17-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Excellent! You did very well with this challenge.

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4 posted 10-17-1999 01:18 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Bravo child. I must say your really happy about facing your fear arent you

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5 posted 10-17-1999 01:51 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Extremely well done, Sys. Challenge well met.
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6 posted 10-17-1999 01:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I once again am impressed by all you talented folks who do these various forms and do them so well!

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well written for a piece so hard to write
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8 posted 10-18-1999 04:48 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Well done indeed my friend.

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