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Starfish worries

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redwriter1
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0 posted 10-16-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

I couldn't forget you
even if I tried
you'll never fade in
my memory or my heart

You don't have to fight
to hold on to something
that is so completely yours
I want to be with you always
and never say good bye..

You are in my heart forever
nothing will ever change that

don't ever worry
not ever
We will have so many
wonderful days to spend
and dream about
and look back on

you'll see

have faith little starfish..

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Denise
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1 posted 10-16-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet!

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JennyLee
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2 posted 10-16-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Very well done.
Sweet verse

Jenny
redwriter1
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3 posted 10-17-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

thank you. Not much form, I know but sometimes things come out that way. (smile)
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4 posted 10-17-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

A very sweet poem. I must say, the title drew me in, and I had no idea what to expect. Great job.

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