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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 10-16-1999 06:58 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Licker of wounds
Swatter of flies
Where are you now
To prevent my demise?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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suicidal dreams
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1 posted 10-16-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

GREAT POETRY HERE CHILD UNFORTUNATELY IT IS HARD TO MAKE A REPLY FOR THIS AS IT IS AN ODD POEM FOR YOU.THE SWATTER OF FLIES, AND LICKER OF WOUNDS IS WITH YOU IN YOUR HOUSE AND HE LOVES YOU.
damn capslock oh well

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life is short kill quick
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


2 posted 10-16-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Would you be referring to God, here, Sys D? If you are, I must say that is a very unique way to describe Him ... LOL ... don't believe I have ever heard that one!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


3 posted 10-16-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

It is for everyone who I have trusted that has betrayed me...I guess, in a way, Nocht, God could fit in there too.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


4 posted 10-17-1999 12:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok...call me dense (!) but I thought it was about a dog!!! My dog likes to lick my wounds..all dogs do..and he likes to chase flies...hmmmmmmmmmm...ok.....
JennyLee
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5 posted 10-17-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Wow !!! Short and to the POINT!!!!


Jenny
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


6 posted 10-17-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

LOL Poet....this poem is any way you want to take it...so if for you it's about a dog, then it's a dog.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
 
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