Open Poetry #3 |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Licker of wounds Swatter of flies Where are you now To prevent my demise? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
GREAT POETRY HERE CHILD UNFORTUNATELY IT IS HARD TO MAKE A REPLY FOR THIS AS IT IS AN ODD POEM FOR YOU.THE SWATTER OF FLIES, AND LICKER OF WOUNDS IS WITH YOU IN YOUR HOUSE AND HE LOVES YOU. damn capslock oh well ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Would you be referring to God, here, Sys D? If you are, I must say that is a very unique way to describe Him ... LOL ... don't believe I have ever heard that one! Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
It is for everyone who I have trusted that has betrayed me...I guess, in a way, Nocht, God could fit in there too. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok...call me dense (!) but I thought it was about a dog!!! My dog likes to lick my wounds..all dogs do..and he likes to chase flies...hmmmmmmmmmm...ok..... |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow !!! Short and to the POINT!!!! Jenny |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
LOL Poet....this poem is any way you want to take it...so if for you it's about a dog, then it's a dog. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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