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spoonphed
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0 posted 1999-10-16 04:17 PM


Got two cards on my birthday
Read them in my room
They said you'd love me forever
That you'd always be true

Picture's left inside my room
Six years ago
Frozen in time, we still remain
And it feels like two days ago

Now i rub my eyes from the cold
Looking back i was twelve years old
Never thought we'd end this way
Always thought that we'd get married

You have always been in my mind
And i cannot escape you
Your the only thing i ever did right
And i wasn't smart enough to keep you

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-16 07:26 PM


Soooooo Sad.

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Denise

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2 posted 1999-10-16 10:37 PM


Very tragic

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides

Elizabeth
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3 posted 1999-10-25 10:04 PM


Yes, spoonohed, very sad, tragic, heartbreaking...hope you get over the pain and regret soon.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


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