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Asphyxiation....... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
The walls are closing in, I'm taking up space, Oxygen is diminishing, I am blue tinged in the face, My lungs are heaving, My chest hurts with the strain, Deep inside my inner core, Dwells the awful rotting pain. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...ouch. Very descriptive one! ------------------ Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Honey, I am so sorry you are hurting sweetie, please know that I am here anytime. (((hugs))) ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Hey there Denise, Thanx for your comment - wasn't feeling too great when I wrote that. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx DA - that really means a lot to me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So few words, such volumes spoken. I am sorry for your pain moonshine ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx Hoot_Owl |
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