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Moonshine
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0 posted 10-16-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

The walls are closing in,
I'm taking up space,
Oxygen is diminishing,
I am blue tinged in the face,
My lungs are heaving,
My chest hurts with the strain,
Deep inside my inner core,
Dwells the awful rotting pain.
© Copyright 1999 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-16-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...ouch. Very descriptive one!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-16-1999 06:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Honey, I am so sorry you are hurting sweetie, please know that I am here anytime.
(((hugs)))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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3 posted 10-16-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Hey there Denise,

Thanx for your comment - wasn't feeling too great when I wrote that.
Moonshine
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4 posted 10-16-1999 09:35 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx DA - that really means a lot to me.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-16-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

So few words, such volumes spoken. I am sorry for your pain moonshine

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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides
Moonshine
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6 posted 10-16-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx Hoot_Owl
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