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Watcher666
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0 posted 10-16-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sweetheart please don't cry
You know each time you do I die
Each tear you cry tears me apart
Thorns pierce my very heart

Holding you close till the storm abates
Cursing out loud the miserable fates
Thatís left you shattered and in such pain
For your relief is my only aim

I'll tell you a story short and sweet
Even let you make fun of my big feet
Remember how we first did meet?
I think I ran into you on the street

I saw your beauty right there and then
And knew I knew you and who you had been
Right from the start you had my heart
Never from you will I part

My friends did laugh at me so
But your love they shall never know
How you brought my from darkest despair
Just with just a glance at you heart so fair

A walk in the woods holding hands
Sitting in the sun on pure white sands
A warm fire on a snowy night
Holding each other seems so right

So love dry those tears
I'm here to calm your deepest fears
Next to my heart I hold you dear
Now my love no more tears


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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
© Copyright 1999 Watcher666 - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-16-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Watcher , this is beautiful

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


2 posted 10-16-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful indeed... well done!
Mary
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3 posted 10-16-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for Mary   Email Mary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mary

Very beautiful Watcher...Well done!
Denise
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4 posted 10-16-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely sentiments!

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Denise
Watcher666
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5 posted 10-18-1999 07:53 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thank-you for reading and your words! They mean much to me.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Lynn
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6 posted 10-18-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn




I would definitly have to agree with everyone else. "BeautifuL pOEm"

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Kitty**
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7 posted 10-18-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

Watcher..
Very, very heart warming. I enjoyed this
a lot.

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Kitty**
Balladeer
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8 posted 10-18-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

excellent sentiments, watcher.
wannabe_poet
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9 posted 10-20-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

Well Watcher... you've done again!
Great job!!!!
Martie
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10 posted 10-20-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

If I were her I would stop crying. Beautiful poem and sentiment.
Pepper
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11 posted 10-20-1999 07:58 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I agree with everyone above .Wonderful sentiments and a beautiful piece.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Laughter
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Love it!!!!!!!!

Laughter
PoeticPreacher
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13 posted 10-20-1999 08:57 PM       View Profile for PoeticPreacher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit PoeticPreacher's Home Page   View IP for PoeticPreacher

My My My. This poem is heartwarming. This particular verse made me felt like cuddling up with my hubby at this exact scene...

A walk in the woods holding hands
Sitting in the sun on pure white sands
A warm fire on a snowy night
Holding each other seems so right
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


14 posted 10-20-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Yeah, it kinda makes me want to go give my boyfriend a kiss and apologize for the tears, the fights...for everything.

I really love this poem.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Severn
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15 posted 10-20-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very well done, watcher.
PhaerieChild
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16 posted 10-21-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

That is incredibly beautiful!!! Well done!!

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

JennyLee
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17 posted 10-21-1999 08:16 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

You did it again!
Loved It!

Jenny
H. Arlequin
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18 posted 10-23-1999 04:13 AM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

encore!!!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


19 posted 10-23-1999 04:18 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

She will cry tears of love after reading this! Great job!
Deverone
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20 posted 10-25-1999 02:00 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

How did I miss this one....

I love this poem. It took me to days when my heart had a love to share and there was nothing I wouldn't do to keep her eyes dry.

Brings a tear to my eye...something that hasn't been there in much, much too long.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---


 
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