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Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-10-16 03:13 AM


I wrote this several years ago...and kinda stumbled upon it tonight, thought it applied a little. This isn't much but it's just a little grattitude from me to say "thanks" for making me feel like its okay to share some of the stuff I've written.

I'd just like to say
thanks for all you've done today.

I was a little apprehensive at first
but you made that bubble burst.

Talking and keeping me company
are things that I noticed indeed.

A cheerful smile and a friendly face
and I feel I'm in a home like place.

I know you feel like your under one's thumb
I'm glad for all things, said and done.

So once again I'd just like to say
Thanks again for all you've done today.


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Thanks everyone for making me
feel at home here.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---


© Copyright 1999 Shawn - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-16 06:34 AM


Nice place to call 'home' isn't it.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-16 02:39 PM


This is a great place, isn't it! Best one I've ever found!

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Denise

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-10-16 03:19 PM


Each new member adds something to the tapestry of our home..your poetry weaves in nicely here...welcome!

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
4 posted 1999-10-17 12:41 PM


Glad to be here and be known.....I appreciate the comments.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 1999-10-17 12:50 PM


Glad to have you, Deverone. Anyone who uses Ray Bradbury as a signature is a friend of mine.
wannabe_poet
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 1999-10-18 12:02 PM


This is so true Deverone it is almost like home.. It is like a comfort zone when you need it the most!
I'm glad I found this place!

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