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redwriter1
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0 posted 10-16-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

If but love
could be as sweet as it's promise

I will forever wonder
which is true

the hope and faith
that love exists
or the real thing

or is it the hope and faith
the make us belive and hence
make love a real thing?


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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 10-16-1999 01:14 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Good question Red...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Deverone
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2 posted 10-16-1999 03:50 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

As said before .....good question.

Nice piece though. Kind of direct and forward...no sugar coating. I enjoyed it.

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"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

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3 posted 10-16-1999 06:40 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thought provoking piece.Liked this one much.

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redwriter1
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4 posted 10-16-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

WHAT? No answers? Speculations? (smile)
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5 posted 10-16-1999 01:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...hmmmm...could be! I dunno! Great poem,though!

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