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spoonphed
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0 posted 10-16-1999 12:38 AM       View Profile for spoonphed   Email spoonphed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spoonphed

stand behind, a tinted window
hoping to find, someone in time
trying to be, someone your not
hoping to get, something they've got

reach inside, find it out
who you are, what you're about
don't try and hide, just let it out
it can't hurt, to be yourself

Take me back,
when i didn't care,
about anything,
and you were there.
When we could be,
be ourselves,
and it didn't matter to anyone else.
All i want is to be this way,
once again,
everyday.





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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-16-1999 06:25 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

If only we could turn the clock back.....Nicely done.

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2 posted 10-16-1999 02:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good! I liked this one alot!

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3 posted 05-04-2004 03:11 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

we can never go back...this I have learned
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