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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
It may seem that now, She is so far away, But I know in my heart, She is with you every moment of every day, Be it on Heaven or on Earth, She is with you always, And by the beautiful person you are, She is so amazed, She is like the diamond stars, In the dark velvet night, Always there shining brightly, But not always in sight, Her love for you, Is the warm sun that shines upon your tearstreaked face, So strong and so true, And from such a deep special place, The soft breeze that blows, And gently caresses your skin, Is her softly touching you, And quietly whispering, That you are so special, And that she lives in your heart, And to always remember, That you are never apart, Because she is always with you, No matter where you may be, For your souls are intertwined, Together eternally....... Don't feel alone. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Moonshine, this is really a beautiful thing you have done, I am speechless, such a beautiful poem, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. tears dwelling ((( hugs))) ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear (((((((DarkAngel))))))) I am glad that you liked it - was for you sweety. @-->->-- |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was really a sweet thing to do! Very touching piece! For a very touching person! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx WhtDove, Yes you're right - DA is a very touching person : ) a beautiful soul. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I echo all the above, soul-sib. May your journey here be long and your reunion what it should be. ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Truly lovely, and very special. You are a kind heart, Moonshine. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DreamEvil, " May your journey here be long and your reunion what it should be." That was beautiful and perfect. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice thing to do and what a nice poem  |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx Caroline, DA is someone that I care about and the poem just flowed onto the paper in front of me. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply Hoot_Owl_rn, You wrote: " What a nice thing to do and what a nice poem " That's cause DA is a nice person that I care about : ) P.S. Are you a registered nurse? |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sweet,soft and touching.Lovely piece here. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear Watcher666, Thanx for your lovely comment. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, please know that I care about you too and I am here whenever you need me hon. Again Thanks so much for this beautiful poem.  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Moonshine! Very lovely sentiments! ------------------ Denise |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx DA - that really means a lot to me. Thanx for being so sweet to me. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Hey there Denise, Thanx for your lovely comment. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Moonshine, yes I'm a regestered nurse in labor and delivery.....I birth babies for a living  |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Dear Hoot_Owl I am an RN as well - well I am in 2nd year uni ( almost registered) that's why I asked. So you're a midwife huh? that's really kewl. |
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