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Moonshine
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0 posted 10-15-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

It may seem that now,
She is so far away,
But I know in my heart,
She is with you every moment of every day,
Be it on Heaven or on Earth,
She is with you always,
And by the beautiful person you are,
She is so amazed,
She is like the diamond stars,
In the dark velvet night,
Always there shining brightly,
But not always in sight,
Her love for you,
Is the warm sun that shines upon your
tearstreaked face,
So strong and so true,
And from such a deep special place,
The soft breeze that blows,
And gently caresses your skin,
Is her softly touching you,
And quietly whispering,
That you are so special,
And that she lives in your heart,
And to always remember,
That you are never apart,
Because she is always with you,
No matter where you may be,
For your souls are intertwined,
Together eternally.......

Don't feel alone.
© Copyright 1999 Jen - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-15-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Moonshine, this is really a beautiful thing you have done, I am speechless, such a beautiful poem, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. tears dwelling ((( hugs)))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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2 posted 10-15-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear (((((((DarkAngel)))))))
I am glad that you liked it - was for you sweety.
@-->->--
WhtDove
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3 posted 10-15-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was really a sweet thing to do! Very touching piece! For a very touching person!
Moonshine
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4 posted 10-15-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx WhtDove,
Yes you're right - DA is a very touching person : ) a beautiful soul.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 10-15-1999 09:52 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I echo all the above, soul-sib. May your journey here be long and your reunion what it should be.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvilŠ


caroline
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6 posted 10-15-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Truly lovely, and very special. You are a kind heart, Moonshine.



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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Moonshine
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7 posted 10-15-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

DreamEvil,

" May your journey here be long and your reunion what it should be."

That was beautiful and perfect.
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-15-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

What a nice thing to do and what a nice poem
Moonshine
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9 posted 10-16-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx Caroline,

DA is someone that I care about and the poem just flowed onto the paper in front of me.
Moonshine
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10 posted 10-16-1999 01:13 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Hoot_Owl_rn,

You wrote: " What a nice thing to do and what a nice poem "

That's cause DA is a nice person that I care about : )

P.S. Are you a registered nurse?
Watcher666
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11 posted 10-16-1999 06:26 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sweet,soft and touching.Lovely piece here.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Moonshine
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12 posted 10-16-1999 08:30 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Watcher666,

Thanx for your lovely comment.
Dark Angel
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13 posted 10-16-1999 08:57 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, please know that I care about you too and I am here whenever you need me hon. Again Thanks so much for this beautiful poem.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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14 posted 10-16-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Moonshine! Very lovely sentiments!

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Denise
Moonshine
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Thanx DA - that really means a lot to me. Thanx for being so sweet to me.
Moonshine
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16 posted 10-16-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Hey there Denise,

Thanx for your lovely comment.
hoot_owl_rn
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Moonshine, yes I'm a regestered nurse in labor and delivery.....I birth babies for a living
Moonshine
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18 posted 10-16-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Hoot_Owl

I am an RN as well - well I am in 2nd year uni ( almost registered) that's why I asked. So you're a midwife huh? that's really kewl.
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