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Nan
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25 posted 10-18-1999 07:41 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You are SUCH a brat!!
Toerag
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26 posted 10-18-1999 08:06 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Now why does a genius kill bugs for a living?
Beats the hell outta me?
Sally S.
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27 posted 10-18-1999 09:51 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I love the twists and turns as you take us on adventures of the mind. You truly are a master of talents.
Kelly
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28 posted 10-18-1999 12:46 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I loved it. Keep em coming.
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29 posted 10-18-1999 02:34 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

An Excellent piece Balladeer! Really loved the ending too!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Iloveit
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30 posted 10-18-1999 02:53 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

joins in the applause, this was absolutely wonderful, you are quite the story teller *big grins* and yep, could just see you hurdling the fence lolol
Sunshine
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31 posted 10-18-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Now my mind twisted the end to have the lady dissolve in Sir 'Deer's arms, while forlorn husband and son came in, for THEY had set the plates as, upon hearing a rumor of their passing, the grieved wife and mother headed for the moors to find her loves, only to perish herself, while the menfolk had returned home, safe.

Ah well, your version is good, too! LOL.

Fine job, Sir 'Deer!

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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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32 posted 10-31-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove




to the top buddy tis the day!
Verma
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33 posted 10-31-1999 01:44 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

This is the first time that i've read this Balladeer, it really made me laugh.
Skyfyre
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34 posted 10-31-1999 06:01 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Big grins here -- a tale well told, and a dash of wit at the end -- quite a satisfying repast you have set before us, Sir Balladeer!

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

U K Hero
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35 posted 10-31-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

one of your best, much loved
 
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