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@!**@!** Screaming to the gods....
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Whispering breezes blow softly - as I stand outside & search the sky... Closing my eyes, I call out your name - Crying up to the heavens, "WHY?" Why 2 souls that are so meant to be - Have to live in 2 world's far apart... Why circumstances - are as they are, Why you question the love in my heart. My eyes closed - I look to the heavens - I cry because you don't understand... I cry - asking you to be patient, To be near me, and just hold my hand... You are the breath that my soul breathes in - Separated - - I'm gasping for air.. I cry to the gods up above me, "My life - with this man, let me share!" ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Beautifully stated, Femme ... I know exactly how you feel. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Femme, I understand your point of view, I just don't like having to deal with the wait, call me spoiled, I guess. I, too, feel like screaming to the sky sometimes. But, please, under no circumstance think I doubt your love...that isn't the case at all. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
me, too, Femme - except, keep yer pickle jar away from me - lol |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, PFF... I especially like the last verse! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The soul is an infinite thing and is unbound by the laws which purport to govern our ephemeral reality. That is how two people far apart can hhave their souls attracted to each other, physical distance is but an illusion to the soul. Sadly, the mind perceives not the soul, just the physical reality. ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Emotional and beautifully done, Femme. I know how you feel. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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