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You Didn't Know Me

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Kitty**
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since 07-27-99
Posts 438
Charlottesville,VA USA


0 posted 10-15-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**


How well did you know me?
What do I like to do?
Do you know that I love to dance,
and writing poetry too?
Do you know I love to fish,
and how much I like to swim?
Do you know I'm like a little girl,
and like to do things on a whim?
How much do I weigh?
What color are my eyes?
What's my favorite food?
Do you know it's chocolate pies?
Do you know I have small feet,
and there's a tiny mark upon one breast?
Where do I go when I feel sad,
or I'm just not feeling my best?

I'm here to say it babe,
But you didn't know me at all.
You didn't know what makes me happy,
or what makes me climb the walls.
You didn't know anything about me,
or even how I feel inside.
You didn't know about all the nights,
lying beside you that I cried.
I don't mean to sound bitter,
but I can't waste any more years.
I want someone that knows me,
and will help me to dry my tears.
That's why I'm no longer there.
You simply did not know your wife.
I'm sorry for you, but it's all over now.
I have found a better life.
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
U K Hero
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since 08-08-99
Posts 271
England


1 posted 10-15-1999 03:18 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

are you writing from Personal experience?
It matters not, its still very good.
Kitty**
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since 07-27-99
Posts 438
Charlottesville,VA USA


2 posted 10-15-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

U K Hero..Yep..This is really the way it was,
as of a year and a half ago. I have found a better life and I believe he has too.
Thanks for the reply!
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


3 posted 10-15-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Good for you!!Well done verse!

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