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This is my Life

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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 10-15-1999 02:54 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

This is my life
Past more real than present
Memories decay
My thoughts are full of death wishes

Past more real than present
Hate now rules my heart
My thoughts are full of death wishes
My soul's a black abyss

Hate now rules my heart
I eye the knife, and the picture of you
My soul's a black abyss
My only morals, you long ago destroyed

I eye the knife, and the picture of you
Memories decay
My only morals, you long ago destroyed
This is my life

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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JennyLee
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1 posted 10-15-1999 03:42 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Come on now Sys, don't be so gloomy LOL...
No,really a dark one here!

Jenny
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-15-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad and dark.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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3 posted 10-18-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A painful portrait. Well expressed.

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Denise
Sally S.
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4 posted 10-18-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Wow....You can't get much darker..well, perhaps you could....eeeek.
Well, I really like the formatting here. Though the content is sad and dark...I still enjoyed the read.
suicidal dreams
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since 09-28-1999
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5 posted 10-18-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Amy you know ill be glad to help you with this one real glad
also great convery of emotions here quite dark and well evil i liked it alot my dear child

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life is short kill quick
 
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