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How I Want To Be Remembered

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-15-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

When I am dead and gone
and my life has ceased to be.
You can miss me if you want,
but donít you bury me.

Cremate me, you heard me right.
Burn me up and place my ash (hehe)
In a place I can always see.
Within an hour glass.

Put me on the mantel
flip me only from 8 to 5.
Cause Iím not working any harder
then when I was alive.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 10-15-1999 02:31 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Lucie, this is so precious. I love it.

Ohme
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2 posted 10-15-1999 02:38 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This was really cute.

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3 posted 10-15-1999 04:04 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL.... I love this, Lucie!
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 10-15-1999 04:32 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lucie

This is terrific! I love that last stanza.
caroline
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5 posted 10-15-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lucie I see you are still rockin' girlfriend! This is great

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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6 posted 10-15-1999 11:03 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

Very cute and witty....enjoyed it!!

HUGGS!!!

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Paula Diane S.
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7 posted 10-16-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Adorable! I loved this!

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