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In the passion of September

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Master
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0 posted 10-15-1999 01:50 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I caught the Autumn like a wicked cold
The morning breeze, like a contagious sneeze
Blew through the city, time came to a halt
To watch the dance of everlasting leaves
Here live the poets, in the passion of September
Here they are born and here they shall remain
And so shall I, as long as Iím remembered
And once forgotten, Iíll resurrect again


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-15-1999 02:02 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can think of only one word for this Master...EXCELLENT!!!!!!APPLAUDS!
Sunshine
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2 posted 10-15-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Enjoyed...much!
Systematic Decay
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3 posted 10-15-1999 02:40 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Beautiful poem. I unfortunately missed out on the beauty of september. I'll have to try to catch a bit of october while its left.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-15-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much! Good read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Master
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5 posted 10-15-1999 08:18 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Hoot and Sunshine!

September lives in us as long as we remember it, SysD.

Watcher666, THanks, glad you liked it!
Skyfyre
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6 posted 10-15-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This painted a picture of auburn and gold, with just enough of a chill to make it authentic. Very well done ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

caroline
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7 posted 10-15-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Master this is truly one of your very best!
Standing ovation for this one



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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

U K Hero
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8 posted 10-15-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

I do apologise, I have been informed that I should read this by ICQ and having read it would like to say Iím sorry I missed it. I have read it four times (in order that I understand and appreciate it fully) and found it very professional and pronoun, in fact I found it your best by far.
Please, Please, write more of this ilk!
Master
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9 posted 10-15-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Nochtdrace and Caroline!

UK Hero, I'm glad you liked it! The idea for this one came from a quote of a great poet. Pushkin once wrote:

"I will not wholy die, my soul in sacred lyre
Will outlive my dust and will escape decay
And in the moonlit sphere my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain"

I'm fascinated with the idea that classic poets could remain alive through us and come back to us just like the season of fall.
Denise
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10 posted 10-16-1999 06:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another masterpiece from the Master!

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Denise
 
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