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Giggles and wiggles

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-15-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Giggles and wiggles

There are few words that can explain,
Our passioned feelings or the pain,
Of childish screams and giggled streams,
That bounce the walls and hang from beams.

There are few words that can encode
The mode that little feet unload.
The cognisance of joy and fears,
That pour upon our heart and ears.

They fill us full of little thrills
That edge our mettle and give us chills.
Their breakthrough of each tiny dare,
Their learning of each how and where.

And it takes us back to a time,
Our lifetime a similar mime.
Pinching all our nerves each giggle,
Squiggling our hearts a wiggle.

They cannot know their little fuss.
Are our lives, relived for us.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-15-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this, Seymour!
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2 posted 10-15-1999 12:12 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This encompasses our childhood, our kids, and our grandkids - quite an enjoyable, amusing read - it liked me much! Thanks, Sy!
Michael
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3 posted 10-15-1999 12:38 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very well done, Seymour.
Good message, and I love the way it's portrayed.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Mona Lisa
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4 posted 10-15-1999 01:00 PM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mona Lisa

Well done. I like the concept and rythm of this poem.
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5 posted 10-15-1999 01:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm giggling, SY.
Justbleu
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6 posted 10-16-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I very much liked what you said and did with this....very cool!!

Bridgette



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Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 10-16-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To all my friends above I offer you some wiggles and giggles and a big thank you.
Denise
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Adorable and oh so true!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-16-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
And a big wiggle for you. *L*
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11 posted 10-16-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Seymour I just LOVE this!! Very well done

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

 
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