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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-10-15 12:08 PM


Giggles and wiggles

There are few words that can explain,
Our passioned feelings or the pain,
Of childish screams and giggled streams,
That bounce the walls and hang from beams.

There are few words that can encode
The mode that little feet unload.
The cognisance of joy and fears,
That pour upon our heart and ears.

They fill us full of little thrills
That edge our mettle and give us chills.
Their breakthrough of each tiny dare,
Their learning of each how and where.

And it takes us back to a time,
Our lifetime a similar mime.
Pinching all our nerves each giggle,
Squiggling our hearts a wiggle.

They cannot know their little fuss.
Are our lives, relived for us.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-10-15 12:09 PM


I like this, Seymour!
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2 posted 1999-10-15 12:12 PM


This encompasses our childhood, our kids, and our grandkids - quite an enjoyable, amusing read - it liked me much! Thanks, Sy!
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3 posted 1999-10-15 12:38 PM


Very well done, Seymour.
Good message, and I love the way it's portrayed.

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Michael Anderson

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He puts a rainbow in your heart.




Mona Lisa
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4 posted 1999-10-15 01:00 PM


Well done. I like the concept and rythm of this poem.
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5 posted 1999-10-15 01:05 PM


I'm giggling, SY.
Justbleu
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6 posted 1999-10-16 03:30 AM


I very much liked what you said and did with this....very cool!!

Bridgette



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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

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7 posted 1999-10-16 06:36 AM


Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-10-16 08:45 AM


To all my friends above I offer you some wiggles and giggles and a big thank you.
Denise
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9 posted 1999-10-16 01:07 PM


Adorable and oh so true!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 1999-10-16 06:26 PM


Denise,
And a big wiggle for you. *L*

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11 posted 1999-10-16 07:54 PM


Seymour I just LOVE this!! Very well done

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


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