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Does This One Ever Suck!

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Toerag
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0 posted 10-15-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Everybody talkin' Villanelle,
A challenge so I've seen,
But it's been done so very well.

I know there's different types,
Some I've never heard of
And there's few I didn't like.

I've never thought about it,
The "Villanelle" thinggie
But I think I'll stick to chocolate.

Oh wait, that's not what ya mean?
Villanelle's a poem form?
Ya didn't mean ice cream?

Never mind................
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Lucie
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1 posted 10-15-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Helloooooo! Hellloooooo! can you hear the echo in here.. hahah..

I like your poem ToeRag..

I just had a bad thought.. What if Ron moves the forum and forgets us..:: h anxiety, anxiety:::
That would be one way to find out if we're loved huh Toe? hehe
Toerag
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2 posted 10-15-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Lucie......People forget about me all the time...But you?..Never oh sweet one!!
And I'll bet Ron would probably love to find a way to forget about me...and leave me behind....LOL

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 10-15-1999).]
suthern
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3 posted 10-15-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL @ ice cream... my form would indicate I've stuck to chocolate a few times too often??? LOL

And how could anyone ever forget you, sweets??? (Or that fine behind? LOL)
Michael
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4 posted 10-15-1999 10:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Morning Toe, obviously I woke up way too earlt this morning...LOL I'm going to back to bed.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Toerag
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5 posted 10-15-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Michael...no man...really, it's okay...it's this piece of crap I posted above..it's not you...really, don't go back to bed...it'll be okay....Ron's just having a "movement"..yea, that's it...He'll probably tell you and some of the others how to access the new place...really....it's been nice knowing ya all though!!!
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 10-15-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ROFLMAO...can I have a chocolate flake in mine please?..*g*

HUSG

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Balladeer
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7 posted 10-15-1999 12:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, Toe! You should give one a try. You're a teacher, ain't ya? Telling kids to learn and study 'n stuff? So do it. I'll bet you would be surprised how well you could do.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 10-15-1999 12:43 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
Villanelle, isn't that vainilla in a shell?
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 10-15-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Laughs, maybe we'll be lucky and this one will get lost in the shuffle
Just kidding Toe....give it(a Vinanelle)a try sometime, without the hot syrup of course
Toerag
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10 posted 10-15-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

thanks gang for all the response....I swear, (as if yall hadn't noticed), I don't know diddly about poetry. I wrote Suthern today tellin' her I figured this meant the first line need to rhyme with the third line, and three is all ya do I think?....I was just playin' and I do wish I had the expertise to do something really good. I'm just a clown, I love this place and all the folks here and just like to play. I don't know how to write poetry. Just play....But thanks for the very kind things yall always seem to reply with to me....Yall are great folks!

Balladeer....I wish I could my friend. I just don't know enough about all this stuff? I am reading however. I checked out several books about poetry yesterday just to find out what the hell all of you real poets are talking about....LOL....Thanks again for the confidence my friend, but, it will be a while before I attempt anything seriously "poet-like".....Now, if ya wanna take voice lessons, guitar lessons, Hapkido lessons, or how to get a gal outta her pants?...I can give ya a phone number?
Watcher666
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11 posted 10-15-1999 08:00 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Too cute!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
caroline
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12 posted 10-15-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Awww Toe...no one could leave you behind!

(Don't worry...I'll slip you the new password...sssshhhh.)

And whoever says you aren't a poet...well them's fightin' words, now! (Southerners stick together, don't we?)

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

suthern
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13 posted 10-15-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toe: Is that YOUR phone number?
If so, can I have it? Please?
I won't even ask for lessons...
Just enjoy your expertise! *G*
Denise
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14 posted 10-16-1999 04:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You should change the title (yeah, I know you can't edit it), 'cause this is great!
And I guess I wasn't the only one afraid of being left behind!

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Denise
 
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