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Severn
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0 posted 10-15-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

This sweet tendril
of longing
stretches away
across all oceans
and I look out
at my cool blue sky
knowing that you
see only dark stars
or perhaps a distant moon
I am lost, so
shivered in the
memory of your voice,
your touch in my soul
if not yet
upon my flesh and
I cannot reach you now,
all I need
is your strength
your love,
the gift of togetherness
so many others have
and do not know
the true bliss of,
victorious Time
spreads a cruel disease
of seconds and minutes
and lonely hours
relishing each tear
shed in his name
I would hold you now
my dove
if Time were but
a shadow to be
killed with a cloud,
if Time were but
a drop of rain
to be dried
by a willing sun...

KM 15.9.99



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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 10-15-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


I wish only that it could be so easy.
Thank you star, for shining bright despite those clouds.
Severn
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2 posted 10-15-1999 01:43 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know that any thought of you drives away all clouds, so don't despair - I'm always here. - agreed.
DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-15-1999 02:24 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This gave my tainted voyeurism cause for pause, yet did I decide to reply in spite of that pause. Cheer up, it could be much worse.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvilŠ


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 10-15-1999 03:49 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Severn, what a beautiful expression of longing and one I know well, keep your faith you two it will happen

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-18-1999).]
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 10-15-1999 12:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
Keen mind keen end.
You have my love my friend.
Balladeer
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6 posted 10-15-1999 01:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The expression of your longing is so genuine it would touch anyone's heart. Beautifully done.
Watcher666
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7 posted 10-15-1999 04:59 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much....excellent Dear Lady.He's a lucky man to have your love.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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8 posted 10-16-1999 07:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A wonderful expression!

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Denise
Severn
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9 posted 10-18-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dear Dream - it could be indeed, I might never have found net-poets! Oh the horror...
Hugs to you OK?

Ruth - what is it about my name!!!!? Not you too...groan...thanks though!

Sey - hey - that is so wonderful! You are my friend indeed.

Balladeer - thankyou, I have never felt longing like this before - that is certain.

watcher - and well he knows it..hehehehe

dsnyder - thankyou, thankyou! I wish I didn't have to write about it though!
Christopher
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10 posted 10-18-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Yes love, and I do know that I am lucky... to have you!
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 10-18-1999 02:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Severn, most sorry for the name thing...corrected it......this gives me a chance to tell you again what a wonderful poem this is
Iloveit
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12 posted 10-18-1999 12:22 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

I loved this, such emotions, and longing, *sigh* beautiful!
 
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