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The chosen one

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-14-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

The chosen one

She is no angel in disguise.
Fly's but not with gossamer rise.
She paints no portraits of pretense
And haunts no twilight of suspense.

Ghosts no themes of moonlight schemes
Does not ride the vague of dreams.
Nor does she promise endless joy.
Or toy with me in playful ploy.

She's there as solid as can be,
With all her glad and misery.
And I need her more and more,
As the years slide by, each score.

Her presence turns a key within.
With a wave, a smile, a simple grin.
She walks me, the abyss of fear.
And holds my hand and dries my tear.

She's the better half of my story
And I give her all the glory.
The essence of the mornings dawn.
I think, the reason I was born.

I cannot know the Lords plan but
He chose me, as the lucky man.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-14-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A real heart melter! How very sweet!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-15-1999 03:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Seymore....your better half maybe, But I can tell you one thing , I'll bet she's sure smiling after this one
Pepper
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3 posted 10-15-1999 07:00 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very,very sweet Sy.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Toerag
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4 posted 10-15-1999 07:41 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done Sy....
Mike
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5 posted 10-15-1999 07:48 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed...
Ohme
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6 posted 10-15-1999 08:42 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Very touching!. Lucky Lady, Lucky You.
suthern
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7 posted 10-15-1999 10:30 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very nice, Seymour... show this one to her!
Sunshine
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8 posted 10-15-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Geez, another Hallmark sale! Well done, Sy!
Michael
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9 posted 10-15-1999 12:21 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Seymour,
This is golden. Definately one of your best, in my eyes.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Watcher666
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10 posted 10-16-1999 05:50 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely! Very lucky Lady you have!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 10-16-1999 08:53 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

So many well wishers, I can only offer my heart felt thanks for your read and nice comments and I'll put in a good word for you all the next time I talk to God.
Severn
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12 posted 10-18-1999 02:36 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is so beautiful, dear Sey.
Well well WELL done!
caroline
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13 posted 10-18-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I second all of the above, Seymour the Sailor Man (here's hoping you are enjoying your cruise ! )

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Iloveit
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14 posted 10-18-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep, will ditto all of the above on this one, really really nice
Julie Jordan Scott
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15 posted 10-18-1999 04:23 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Isn't this what we all long for? A partner who completes us! A gratifying life long relationship!

Bravo, Seymour, Bravo! An inspiration!
Soleil
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16 posted 10-18-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

Sounds like she is pretty special. So is the poem.
 
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