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coming storm

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RobertB
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0 posted 10-14-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Coming Storm

Flash of lightening
fills the window
opened slightly
allowing thunder
to lunge through
and rattle
me from sleep

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Denise
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1 posted 10-14-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Perfection! I can almost imagine being awoken by this storm! I say almost 'cause nothing wakes me up! I've even slept through earthquakes! Very good, Robert.

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Denise
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SO few words, so much in the way of visuals, beautiful
Nan
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RobertBSuccinct - That's my new name for you...
RobertB
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4 posted 10-15-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Woa....hold on there Nan....let me get my Webster's out and look up succinct.

ok..../concise..terse. Let me look up terse.
...Hmmmm ok yes. - using as few words as possible without loss of force or clearness.

OK....you may from here on out call me RobertBSuccinct. I rather like that.

:-}

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Alwye
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awesome....so few words, yet you truly create the scene, the mood well...great work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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love those nights like that!
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