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Tears of my soul

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 10-14-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Tears of my soul
lit by your flame

I knew a life with you
as we gave our gifts to share
would sparkle with love and fun
knowing how much we cared

but maybe
we hurt each other deeply
and maybe
we should have understood

that I would lose my way
knowing life without you there
would by contrast
be so empty and bare

Tears from my soul
crying embers from our flame

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-14-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful, but so sad... I hope those tears bring rainbows soon, dear friend.
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2 posted 10-14-1999 02:07 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

will echo suthern here too, hope that your tears wash away the pain and soon you will have your rainbow

hugs
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3 posted 10-14-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Echos and dittos... that O&O is a thought thief! LOL.

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-14-1999).]
Pepper
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4 posted 10-14-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

A heartfelt poem. Hugs R G

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-14-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whoa....this is wonderful. Great job Rainbow
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6 posted 10-14-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

RainbowGirl, this is so touching and so well done! I enjoyed this one very much!

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Denise
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7 posted 10-15-1999 03:28 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks all..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Alwye
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8 posted 10-16-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful and so very touching, Rainbow....wonderful job.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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9 posted 10-16-1999 02:30 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautifully written, but so sad RG. Hope you are happy and sharing those rainbows with us all again soon. If you want to talk to someone out of the picture email me again ...

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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10 posted 10-16-1999 06:12 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Alwye: Thanks sweetheart

HUGS

Isis: Thanks for the mail..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JTF
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11 posted 10-16-1999 06:22 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I share a tear ...

HUSG
Watcher666
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12 posted 10-16-1999 06:55 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad,but beautiful.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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oh my...this is touching
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