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Scenes From the Cabin up North - Part 1
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Scenes From the Cabin up North - Part 1 |
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MrGuy New Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 1MI, USA |
I woke up freezing this morning. The sound of coffee percolating crept under the door and danced in the golden rays. I pulled the covers up higher. But the smell of Autumns long since past had mingled with firewood and kept brushing my cheek. I heard you call the dogs inside, but they were too far away and the only response you got was from Old Man Winter. You climbed in my side of the bed, and the warmth of your skin on mine silenced the morning coffee, and I drifted back to sleep. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Oh yeah, been there, done that...thanx for posting this. I wonder where "North" is for you? INclan |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice imagery in this piece, welcome to Passions  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice! Welcome! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Very nice imagery. I know it well. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful visual....your piece made me feel very warm and peaceful. Good work MrGuy. Welcome to Passions. ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful picture you have painted here!  ------------------ Denise |
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