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Scenes From the Cabin up North - Part 1

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MrGuy
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0 posted 10-14-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for MrGuy   Email MrGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MrGuy

I woke up freezing this morning.
The sound of coffee percolating
crept under the door and danced
in the golden rays.

I pulled the covers up higher.
But the smell of Autumns long since past
had mingled with firewood
and kept brushing my cheek.

I heard you call the dogs inside,
but they were too far away
and the only response you got
was from Old Man Winter.

You climbed in my side of the bed,
and the warmth of your skin on mine
silenced the morning coffee,
and I drifted back to sleep.
© Copyright 1999 MrGuy - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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1 posted 10-14-1999 01:34 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Oh yeah, been there, done that...thanx for posting this. I wonder where "North" is for you?

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Nice imagery in this piece, welcome to Passions
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3 posted 10-14-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very nice! Welcome!
Marilyn
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4 posted 10-14-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. Very nice imagery. I know it well.
Pepper
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5 posted 10-14-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wonderful visual....your piece made me feel very warm and peaceful.
Good work MrGuy. Welcome to Passions.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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6 posted 10-18-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful picture you have painted here!

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Denise
 
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