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Watcher666
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0 posted 1999-10-14 11:11 AM


Lay your head upon my thighs
Let me gaze in those beautiful eyes
Seeing the world which lives in there
My fingers gliding through silken hair


Skin as soft as new fallen snow
Shaded tawny as that of the Doe
With lips so kissable
You are irresistible

With shoulders rounded just so
How can I ever let you go?
How can I wait for the delight?
Of holding you closely all through the night

But come the morning you're still there
Tangled I am in your hair
Limbs entwined in lovers Dance
Fond remembrances of Passion dance

Separately we go from here
Memories each of us hold so dear
Counting the minutes until twilight
And the renewal of passion flight




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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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1 posted 1999-10-14 12:41 PM


I like this alot Watcher.....very well written....lovely

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-10-14 01:07 PM


I like it, I love it, I want some more of it
Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 1999-10-14 01:08 PM


Welcome to the playground : ) Beautifull !!
Michael
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4 posted 1999-10-14 06:56 PM


Wow, this is pure eloquence.
Loved it, Watcher.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.




Denise
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5 posted 1999-10-14 07:34 PM


Passion's flight is the perfect title for this perfect piece!

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Denise

Dark Angel
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6 posted 1999-10-14 07:37 PM


Watcher666, WOW, I love this, I'm with Hoot, I too want more!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-10-15 03:35 AM


Watcher: Beautiful

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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8 posted 1999-10-15 08:16 AM


Lilting and erotic

Jenny

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
9 posted 1999-10-15 08:25 AM


Well done watcher. I love too!
Watcher666
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10 posted 1999-10-15 04:49 PM


Thank-You all for your kind words.It means much to me.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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11 posted 1999-10-15 05:43 PM


Elegantly done and welcome to Passions.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©



caroline
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12 posted 1999-10-15 07:06 PM


Watcher, this is wonderful
Looking forward to more!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


Skyfyre
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13 posted 1999-10-15 08:26 PM


yum ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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