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'Bout Them Tears..White Dove Wants Ta know.

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Toerag
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0 posted 10-14-1999 11:03 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Tears are like rain,
Droplets of pain,
Either physical or mental,
It's pain all the same.

Tears rinse out the hurt,
And cleanse one's mind,
A loving hug,
Dries tears in time.

Raindrops of sadness,
Dew from the heart,
Some tears never dry,
That's the saddest part.
© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-14-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How incredibly beautiful... and how very true! Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-14-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
Very good I enjoyed.
WhtDove
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3 posted 10-14-1999 11:11 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WEll Toe, you've written something so very true! I loved it, it was beautiful! Thanks buddy!
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-14-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Very good read! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 10-14-1999 11:23 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Darling: So true...Can I have a hug?..

HUSG

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Iloveit
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6 posted 10-14-1999 11:33 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

love this toe, this is beautiful
Pepper
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7 posted 10-14-1999 11:43 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

another beautiful here Toe.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-14-1999 12:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Toe, I'm impressed....I do so like this serious side to ya
Toerag
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9 posted 10-14-1999 02:35 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Hoot...so?..ya wanna fool around?...LOL...thanks guys and gals for the kind words....I do have a serious side, but I keep it in the fridge next to my beer most of the time.....

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Michael
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10 posted 10-14-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well at least your serious side is in the fridge and accessible once in a while, I kept mine in the deep freeze for many years. It is good to see this side of you, I must agree.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Denise
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11 posted 10-14-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Toe, this is impressive! Your serious side is as beautiful as your funny side is hillarious! Your talent is well rounded!

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Denise
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12 posted 10-15-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toerag: I think the consensus is... we want more! *G*
JTF
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13 posted 10-16-1999 06:15 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Toe, you should write more serious schtuff ... and more funnies as well ... in short, you should write more ...
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you mushy guy
 
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